Keeping the Dressing

Good Personal Narrative

This 2nd grader shares a story of a humorous experience at a restaurant.

Title: Keeping the Dressing

Level: Grade 2

Mode: Narrative Writing

Form: Personal Narrative

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Keeping the Dressing

Last summer I made my sister really mad. My grandmother gave us money to eat in the dining car on the train. I ate turkey. I asked the waiter to wrap up the dressing. I said, “I don’t like dressing, but my dad does.”

My sister is 12. She says she will never go to a restaurant with me again. She says nobody wants old dressing. But my dad ate it.

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