A Sad Day

Poor Personal Narrative

A third-grade writer created this narrative paragraph about a difficult time.

Title: A Sad Day

Level: Grade 3

Mode: Narrative Writing

Form: Personal Narrative

Student Model

A Sad Day

I asked my mom if we could get a pet. We got a parakeat. One day it flew out the window. I was sad. I cried and cried.

Rubric

© 2018 Thoughtful Learning. Copying is permitted.

k12.thoughtfullearning.com